Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts

Wednesday, 31 August 2016

Should We Drink Fizzy?

SHOULD WE DRINK FIZZY?

My opinion is that we should not drink fizzy because it’s not healthy for us.

My first reason is that fizzy drinks make your heart beat faster than normal heartbeat.The caffeine in a fizzy drink is a stimulant and can keep your heart working harder for up to 15 minutes.  Drinking 3 cans of fizzy drink can increase the chance of heart disease.

The second reason that fizzy drinks are bad for you is that they can lead you to diabetes.Drinking 2 cans of fizzy drink can increase the chance of liver damage.The sweetness of the fizzy can cause premature birth in pregnant women.  

The third reason that fizzy drinks are bad for you.It can change your brain and it would lead to hyperactivity.Fizzy drinks can make us fat and can increase our risk of  cancer by drinking 2 sugary soft drinks.

Fizzy drinks are bad for us because they are not healthy and bad for us.

WALT:Explain Our Opinion if we should drink fizzy drinks.

Today for writing I have been working on this piece of work,We had to explain "should we drink fizzy drinks" Here are some reason about why we shouldn't drink Fizzy drinks. Please comment on my blog so I know what I have achieved and what I need to work on.

Monday, 29 February 2016

I Heard a Whisper

I Heard a whisper but no one was there

One Dark Spooky Night at 9:30pm,We were walking in a dark alley way, going back home just came back from the movies with my two best friends Ajani and Paris W we were walking and walking ,until we heard a whisper coming for the back of us .We were wondering who was there,we were all saying “Hello is Anyone there” but no one answered so we started walking back home and we heard the whisper again this time we heard what it said it said “Help Me Please” Ajani Was scared and she Said “let go see what was there because I want to go help that person” so we were walking towards the place, where the whispered happened but no one was there so Paris W and Ajani were upset.

We looked at our Iphones and the time was 11:30pm so we decided to walk back the way we were going and the problem was that Ajani and Paris W Said “Come on let's sit and wait until we hear the whisper so we sat and waited and waited 1 hr later it was 12:00pm waiting and waiting then we heard the whisper again it said “Help Me I’m in danger Help” we were running as fast as we could but we didn’t see anyone anywhere so I decided to tell Paris W and Ajani so let’s call it a night to remember so scary when we were walking home just 5 mins away from home,someone was calling Ajani she answered the phone and it said “Why didn’t you help me I was in danger and so are you and your friends”

Ajani was so scared she ran as fast as she could back home she was screaming down the neighborhood, everyone woke up and wasn’t happy so Paris W and I were walking back home and hoping that the person that was whispering was safe (Walking and Walking opened the door of the house) we went into our room and Ajani was in her bed scared and shaking,we asked her who was on the phone, and what did they say was it bad? (Ajani Answered) It was that person that was whispering they said “Why didn’t you help me I was in danger and so are you and your friends”

Paris W and I Gasped, We were hiding under the cover sheets on our bed and were scared so were left the light on in our room we were so scared that we cried and cried until we looked at the time and it was Sunday Morning at 3:00am in the morning crying so we decided to watch television and while we were watching we all fell asleep dreaming and dreaming hoping that it will never ever happen again.

To Be Continued....

Friday, 26 February 2016

T.P.S Picnic Day

T.P.S Picnic Day

One hot sunny bright day at T.P.S we had a whole school Picnic we had families over and heaps of us were happy about the day there were Bouncy Castles,A Water slide,Spongebob Squeeze,Softball & Volleyball,Ice Blocks and many More when it was 1:00pm.

We all got to go and have some fun everyone went to the water slide Nita and I went to Mrs Manuyag and Took her dog Kalila for a walk around the school we were running and running until Mrs Fepuleai came out with the volleyball net everyone started to go and play volley Nita decided to go play volley and I took Kalila for a walk she got tired so I picked her up and walked with while she was in my hands.

When I was Walking Everyone from the classes upstairs and downstairs were having a water fight everyone was running around trying to get each other Falakika (Nita’s Sister) and I we walking and I felt Something so Cold that I nearly Died I looked back and saw that Kenneth Was the one who wet me, I didn’t do anything so kika and I we walking and then I saw Paige wondering why she wasn’t doing anything she Picked up Kalila and I asked her “do you want to look after her”? she said “Yes” so when I gave Kalila to Paige, Falakika went with her while Paige had Kalila I started playing Water fight with my Friends and we all got the teachers.

Everyone started to wet me so I told them free shot and then October free shotted me and then I ran away with Ajani & Frances  and then Jason was running to me and Said “Free Shot aye free shot Right” I was like “Yeah Go do it not” so we all running,Raechal and I went up to Miss Aireen and asked “Miss If We Wet You Would We get Into Detention” then she said “yes yes yous will be in big trouble” then It was time for us to get everything packed up and we had to pick up rubbish.Then we all met up as a syndicate senior assembly outside we were all wet and soaking.

The End

Thursday, 29 October 2015

Rona And The Moon Words T4W3


WALT pronounce words in different cultures..

Today Nita,Paige and I have been working on this google on how to say words in different cultures.Me and Nita and Paige have been struggling on this drawing because we did not understand Niuean.
Niuean was the hardest for us to do but we hope you enjoy learning...

Please leave a comment on what you learnt....

Tuesday, 1 September 2015

Te Whare Tapa Wha


WALT:apply our knowledge of Te Whare Tapa Wha and what Would It look Like At
School and at Home.
Today Our Class have done a independent task about our health and what we need to work on to make our self healthy we had to complete seven slides about health I hope that when you read my presentation  you know what to do with your health.Please comment on my blog so I know what I need to work on so I know what to do next when we do our activity next week.
ENJOY READING AND GET INSPIRED!!!

Friday, 1 November 2013

The Horrible Tsunami





The Horrible Tsunami
Orientation:“One morning i woke up i heard lots of noise out down at the streets i looked out  my window and saw are big wave it was bigger than a big bear”.“I thought i was having a dream but when i looked in side of the wave i saw houses and when it was coming towards me i run as fast i had two choices  my 1st choice was to stay there so i would get flashed away from the tsunami and my 2nd choice was to run as fast to the mountain well the mountain was 100m away so i ran as fast but faster than a cheetah i  got to the mountain”.

Problem:I looked around and ask myself “where are my friends”? So i looked for a tree so i can have my lovely rest from running so fast faster, like are cheetah  but really i’m so tired from running so i’m  just gonna have my rest.I saw are waterfall i was hungry.


Room 5 Best Dragon

Wednesday, 30 October 2013

Tsunami Narrative




“One morning i woke up i heard lots of noise out down at the streets i looked out  my window and saw are big wave it was bigger than a big bear”.“I thought i was having a dream but when i looked in side of the wave i saw houses and when it was coming towards me i run as fast i had two choices  my 1st choice was to stay there so i would get flashed away from the tsunami and my 2nd choice was to run as fast to the mountain well the mountain was 100m away so i ran as fast but faster than a cheetah i  got to the mountain ”.I wonder where are my friends?!!!!

Tuesday, 10 September 2013