Should We Drink Fizzy?

SHOULD WE DRINK FIZZY?

My opinion is that we should not drink fizzy because it’s not healthy for us.

My first reason is that fizzy drinks make your heart beat faster than normal heartbeat.The caffeine in a fizzy drink is a stimulant and can keep your heart working harder for up to 15 minutes.  Drinking 3 cans of fizzy drink can increase the chance of heart disease.

The second reason that fizzy drinks are bad for you is that they can lead you to diabetes.Drinking 2 cans of fizzy drink can increase the chance of liver damage.The sweetness of the fizzy can cause premature birth in pregnant women.  

The third reason that fizzy drinks are bad for you.It can change your brain and it would lead to hyperactivity.Fizzy drinks can make us fat and can increase our risk of  cancer by drinking 2 sugary soft drinks.

Fizzy drinks are bad for us because they are not healthy and bad for us.

WALT:Explain Our Opinion if we should drink fizzy drinks.

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